Goldylocks and the Three Bears By Edward Miller

This story takes place in the deep dark forest . The three bears just went out for a walk and well you know the story ,in the end the three bears came back and saw all There porgy gone and there Chairs been sat on and baby bears chairs was broken. Up stairs they found Goldilocks's,but the three little did int scar her out the made her ........make more porgy and..fix the chair and help make the beds.so the moral was maby if you ask you will get it but if you don't you will get told off.I really thort it was a good way to change the story and it really was a good book with good pitches.            
                        By Sophie